Lede #4
Identity theft victims of Towson will benefit from a proposed bill to help cardholders see if their numbers have been stolen online, said a state representative.
Lede # 5
The Maryland Department of Education awarded more than $30 million to 53 school districts throughout the state to help aide educational programs and fill the demand for needed materials.
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Great job on both of these ledes! Active voice, SVO and detailed but concise. One little tip: there's an "a" missing from #4. Do you see where it should go?
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